[原创]为诗词之妄谈

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发表于 2009-9-19 11:23:56 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
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<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">读诗读词,吾学识浅薄,不求甚解。莽莽心际,自有一点灵犀。遇良而鼓,逢畅则欢。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">且观其势,势足则字里蕴万剑飞舞之劲,诵之可激荡胸怀,有肢体肆意展动之快。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">且查其韵,韵至则行间柔媚,读来心思婉转,可参清风明月。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">有势无韵,譬如有放无回,刚强太甚。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">有韵无势,轻柔过度,无以昂然,成其情而不全其志。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">无势无韵,或空其势(纯以形式化的文字造势,味同嚼蜡,口水诗罢了)且僵其韵(律可押韵,亦可压韵,押固可成方圆,压则僵其神气),不过一堆乱文字。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">有势有韵,读来志高超而情舒远,胸怀有激荡亦有缠绵,起伏有致,琅琅上口。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">窃思这作诗词者,如金庸笔下之<?xml:namespace prefix = st1 ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:smarttags" /><st1:PersonName w:st="on" ProductID="张">张</st1:PersonName>君宝,习太极而忘之。为何忘之?皆入心耳。如不忘之,对敌时全盘套路,反不知怎使。忘非生之忘,乃熟之忘。忘而自然,拳出由心,非思非想。不思不想,乃灵动而非脑动。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">这作诗词者,如贝多芬创命运交响曲。那时其耳朵全聋,犹能出此千古激昂之曲。其乐非乐入耳入心,乃心中自有天籁。心思一动,若琴弦动,若乐声动,何赖于乐器。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><st1:PersonName w:st="on" ProductID="张"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">张</span></st1:PersonName><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">君宝者,贝多芬者,前者习而忘之,后者聋而乐之,皆有此心故。积纯熟之技而作自然之艺。量变及质变。人若不能达此,纵得五车之学,不知解化,所学亦为庸俗,纵获名利而不长情志。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">学而以情,用而以志。作诗词者,然也。入自然之境,字虽受文限,情志而不受。情高然者,驭字为马;志高然者,驾文若风。相得益彰,善而往之。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">作诗词者,常有知方圆者而不成方圆,不知方圆者成方圆。何故?知方圆而无情志,终失方圆;不知方圆而携情志,成其方圆。故吾常见所谓作家者,文笔粗俗;名不见传者,用墨清新隽永,令人回味。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">故:宁因无知而拥情志,不因博闻而陷套路。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: center 207.65pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">吾之谈多为妄谈。学识之薄,远远难成气候。幸而一点天赋,能粗品诗词之势与韵,作此妄谈。而世上之事有高低解法,大家笑小家,小家笑俗家。我之谈必有人品,必有人比,必有人诋。品我者且一笑,必我者且一笑,诋我者且一笑。不必认真。道法自然,何谓自然?其实,自然是阳关道,自然是独木桥,自然是你来我往,熙熙攘攘。自然是所有矛盾的结合。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana"><o:p></o:p></span></p></div>

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