[原创]夏之魂

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<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: 149.0pt"><font size=6><span lang=EN-US><span style="mso-tab-count: 1"><font face=Arial>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">夏之魂<span lang=EN-US><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></span></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; tab-stops: 149.0pt" align=center><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">文学院<span lang=EN-US>081</span>洪映如<span lang=EN-US><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp; </span></span></span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; tab-stops: 149.0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">告别了春天的温存<span lang=EN-US>,</span>夏天的气息开始旎漫。季节的更换<span lang=EN-US>,</span>总有一些表现<span lang=EN-US>,</span>于是有些人开始抱怨太阳的毒辣、空气的闷热<span lang=EN-US>.</span>我不拒绝夏天<span lang=EN-US>,</span>炎热中更多的是丝丝的快意。<span lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; tab-stops: 149.0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">夏天的阳光十分充足<span lang=EN-US>,</span>它早早就逃离地平线<span lang=EN-US>,</span>于是我们会发现近来天亮的有点快。住在中一栋背阳的宿舍<span lang=EN-US>,</span>阳台在其他的季节是很难得到阳光的亲睐的。当看到阳光在阳台出现的时<span lang=EN-US>,</span>兴奋油然而生<span lang=EN-US>,</span>有久旱逢甘霖的快感。于是速速拿出鞋子、被单等让阳光亲吻<span lang=EN-US>,</span>作是一种欢迎的仪式。<span lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; tab-stops: 149.0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">我不知道自己为什么对夏天情有独钟<span lang=EN-US>,</span>无法用语言文字来诠释。喜欢就是喜欢<span lang=EN-US>,</span>一种微妙的感觉<span lang=EN-US>,</span>很有蕴味。<span lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; tab-stops: 149.0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">发现自己最近起得特别早<span lang=EN-US>,</span>似乎是恋上了夏日的清晨。喜欢她<span lang=EN-US>,</span>空气清新<span lang=EN-US>,</span>伴着淡得有点难察觉的花香；风不大<span lang=EN-US>,</span>丝丝的<span lang=EN-US>,</span>却清凉到心田；阳光不强<span lang=EN-US>,</span>柔柔的<span lang=EN-US>,</span>如同恋人的轻抚；而且还残留着昨夜的沉寂。只是少了悦耳的鸟鸣<span lang=EN-US>,</span>总觉得少了一份惬意。住在中一<span lang=EN-US>,</span>边临大马路<span lang=EN-US>,</span>一天中独有深夜与清晨才能有一番宁静。错开这两个时间段<span lang=EN-US>,</span>剩下的是汽车烦躁的鼾声<span lang=EN-US>,</span>有点煞人风景。<span lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: 149.0pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp; </span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">早晨<span lang=EN-US>,</span>找一块阴凉的地方<span lang=EN-US>,</span>读冰心<span lang=EN-US>,</span>读朱自清是一种难得的享受。动动嘴<span lang=EN-US>,</span>耳朵能听见声音与空气的和唱。我是最近才开始这一享受的<span lang=EN-US>,</span>时间不长<span lang=EN-US>,</span>却有所体会<span lang=EN-US>,</span>实为难得<span lang=EN-US>.</span>直到太阳稍稍高了<span lang=EN-US>,</span>便合上书<span lang=EN-US>,</span>该忙什么就忙什么去<span lang=EN-US>,</span>从不耽误。踩着夏天的步伐<span lang=EN-US>,</span>向前走！<span lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: 149.0pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp; </span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">喜欢夏日的晚霞。仰望天的西边<span lang=EN-US>,</span>那迟迟不肯入归地平线的夕阳把半边天照得通红。定格中<span lang=EN-US>,</span>一幅壮观的自然之画映入眼帘。倘若适逢有大片的团云飘零浮在日斜的方向<span lang=EN-US>,</span>景色就更美妙。灰色中透出淡淡的红晕<span lang=EN-US>,</span>看此般美景<span lang=EN-US>,</span>哪会有“夕阳无限好<span lang=EN-US>,</span>只是近黄昏<span lang=EN-US>”</span>的感慨。<span lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: 149.0pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp; </span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">暮色降临<span lang=EN-US>,</span>空气中还有白天的遗热<span lang=EN-US>,</span>星星、月亮迫不及待地挂上天幕<span lang=EN-US>.</span>躺在校园的草坪上<span lang=EN-US>,</span>呼吸着带有青草味的空气<span lang=EN-US>,</span>又是一番感触。<span lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: 149.0pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp; </span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">夏夜深了<span lang=EN-US>,</span>蚊子们开始了交响乐<span lang=EN-US>,</span>嗡嗡、、、、、、闭上眼睛聆听这一美妙的天籁<span lang=EN-US>,</span>平静地再次进入夏日的梦境。<span lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: 149.0pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp; </span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">夏天携来的不只只是酷热<span lang=EN-US>,</span>用心发现<span lang=EN-US>,</span>用心感受<span lang=EN-US>,</span>原来还有一片精彩<span lang=EN-US>:</span>有颜色<span lang=EN-US>,</span>有气味。有声音……<span lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
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很散文似的表达，表现了大学生的生活状态，文字能力还不错，但缺乏张力和结合力，供参考