[原创]情殇 四则

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发表于 2009-3-25 22:30:45 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
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<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312">情殇 四则(诗词组合)<br /><span lang=EN-US><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></span></span></b></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 68.25pt; mso-char-indent-count: 6.5"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">084班邓原<br />&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <br />&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 之一</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 57.75pt; mso-char-indent-count: 5.5"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">别知己</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">一顷碧波荡千里,几枝红梅照寒冬。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">融雪惹绿杨柳岸,晨霜染白送别亭。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">花不伤人人自扰,山不驱水水自流。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">只恨泪洒阳关道,梦绕离人愁思情。</span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 68.25pt; mso-char-indent-count: 6.5"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">之二</span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 57.75pt; mso-char-indent-count: 5.5"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">觅红颜</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">潇潇泪,锁深秋。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">泪无痕,心挂伤。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">花开花落花还在,人分人合人却亡。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">远方发髻向谁人?眼前君郎盼汝归。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">情若磐石终不移,意如蒲苇早断绝。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">竟渡人生水,透看世事尘。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">一瓢泪,几觞愁。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">望山岳,听琵琶。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">望不尽重重叠叠山,听不绝断断续续音。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">何处是彼岸,何人是英台?</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">我欲化蝶,谁能与共?</span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 68.25pt; mso-char-indent-count: 6.5"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">之三</span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">叹往事</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">残红枯叶枝头挂,西风轻扫满地黄。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">窗外促织催人老,悲情更比秋景凉。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">苦泪难沾愚人眼,万事洞明心易伤。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">千杯愁肠独怅惘,何日梦醒对斜阳。</span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 68.25pt; mso-char-indent-count: 6.5"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">之四</span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">悲世道</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">西风紧,秋渐浓。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">愁入心,眉深锁。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">故人归,挽手谈。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">景变迁,人不同。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">昔日满堂客,如今椅却凉。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">野草满庭院,霜叶过残垣。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">花悲清秋,雁寻暖阳。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">古井映人影,小石激波澜。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">泪落琴弦嘶哑声,断砚更伤情。</span><span lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">莫听一曲愁乐府,哀调碎人心。</span></p>
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沙发
发表于 2009-3-25 23:00:39 | 只看该作者
很不错的嘛
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<br />支持一下先,让人气旺起来 [:2-1:]  [:2-1:]

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板凳
发表于 2009-3-26 10:04:16 | 只看该作者
不错的诗
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<br />有韵味,意境好
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<br />措词很好
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<br /> [:2-1:]

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地板
发表于 2009-3-26 14:25:50 | 只看该作者
感觉楼主在这种古诗词的创作方面还颇具胆识
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<br />但有否自己去感受一下词韵?古典诗词的平仄呢?
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<br />文字虽美,但对于古诗词的韵律还有待加强
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<br />个人意见

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